Sansûkh Sneak Peek – Chapter 46

I POST THIS IN THE FULL KNOWLEDGE THAT IT HAS BEEN A HELLA LONG TIME SINCE I UPDATED. So, here is a bit of the draft for Ch46, with my sincerest apologies. *smooches*

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“So you are telling me,” said the Stonehelm, very slowly,
“that the Dwarrowdam who served my father as his guard was in fact Queen of the Blacklocks.

Ashkar shrugged and took a sip of wine. “Rightfully, this is
so.”

“She was deposed,” added Kara.

Orla herself was sitting stiffly to attention. Her face was
set and her eyes glittered with a dozen emotions, but she made no sound at all.
Dwalin was holding her hand.

“Strictly speaking, her mother was assassinated, and Orla
was framed for the deed,” Ashkar said, frowning at Kara. “But the exact
technical details mean little.”

Watching, Balin huffed into his beard and nudged Thorin with
his elbow. “Did you know about this?”

“Some,” Thorin admitted. “But not much.”

“So the current Queen is a pretender?” The Stonehelm turned
to Orla and raised his eyebrows. “Orla?”

If anything, Orla’s back stiffened even further, and Dwalin
shifted closer to her. “Look, it’s been difficult for her,” he said, in what
was probably the understatement of the Age. “She hasn’t spoken about all this
in decades.”

“I do not want the throne of the Ghomali court,” she said. “My
home is here, in Erebor. I will not return.”

“There’s many who would rejoice to hear that you live,” said
Ashkar gently. “We did.”

Orla’s eyes slid shut, and her jaw worked as she swallowed.
Then she nodded. “I know. But there are also those who would work great evil
against me and mine, and I will not have that.”

“Why depose you in the first place, though?” Gimli said,
tipping his head. “Why put your sister on your throne?”

“Good question,” murmured Balin.

“Because The Cult couldn’t use Queen Ara nor her first
daughter, Orla, but they found the second more malleable. My mother Arna wanted
to please, above all things,” said Kara, bitterness twisting her voice. “The
Cult of Sauron used that. Now she is completely under their thumb, lost in the
haze of their words and drugs. I honestly don’t think she knows my name, most
days.”

Orla’s shoulders hunched, and her eyelids squeezed tight.
Her breath escaped her in a soundless shudder.

“But Sauron is dead now,” Gimli said, and indicated Legolas
and himself. “We can attest to that. So what do they have to gain from
promoting his worship?”

“Power, what else?” said Thranduil, shaking his head. “I
fear that undoing his works will be the labour of many Ages yet.”

“Dwarves are not afraid of hard work,” said the Stonehelm
firmly, a hint of his Iron Hills burr in his voice. “And this will be long, and
hard. They have held the realm for more than fifty years in the name of their
puppet, and their dominance will be well-established. Still, they must know by
now that the Dark Power is overthrown. That will drive them into
disorganisation and despair.”

Orla’s head snapped up, her eyes narrowed. “I will not be an
instrument in any plans you devise. I will not be a figurehead for you.”

The Stonehelm sighed. “That is not what I am suggesting.
Orla, I would never do such a thing to you! I have received my own throne in a
war, unwilling and too soon: would I wish the same on a friend?”

Dwalin glowered under his brows, and his muscles bunched in
warning. “Just so’s that’s understood, then. Yer Majesty.”

“I do not want them to know I live,” said Orla, and she
turned to face Ashkar and Kara. Her words were halting as she spoke, as though
she were assembling thoughts that had lain asunder for years upon years. “My
life is my own to risk. But I have sons. I have a home, and a people I have
chosen, and I have fought and bled with them, and for them. I will not
relinquish them, nor put them in danger.”

“Like to see ‘em try it,” growled Dwalin.

“I wouldn’t,” said Ashkar bluntly. “You may be formidable in
war, I do not doubt, but the Cult uses weapons other than steel. They will
uphold one belief and perform another openly and before all, profess their
decency and respect whilst tearing you apart with their slippery words – and
when words have served their purpose and all opposition is disgraced and
terrified, ah! Then! Then the steel emerges.”

“The question of whether we confront them is not under
discussion,” said the Stonehelm wearily. “We cannot fight another war, on such
a distant front, so soon.”

“Then what can we do?” Kara said, and she wrung her hands.
Her face was tired beyond her young years. “Aunt Orla-”

“It is not my home any longer,” said Orla, kindly but with
absolute finality.

“But it is my
home!” Kara burst out. “And you could save it!”

“No, child,” she said, and reached out to lay a hand upon
Kara’s shoulder, catching and holding her gaze. “No, I do not think I am the
one destined to do that.”

Kara’s lip quivered as she stared at her aunt, and then she
lowered her head. “I had hoped…” she said brokenly.

Thorin gnawed on his lip and tugged at the plait in his
beard, his feelings torn. “Does she not feel a responsibility to her people?”
he muttered. “Does she not wish to seek her birthright?”

Balin gave him a sympathetic glance. “Not everyone is you, my friend.”

“I know, I know,”
Thorin said. “And she has forged her own path after losing so much, enduring so
much, and I do understand why she would not risk the happiness she has found
nor the others in her life…”

“But it would not be your way.” Balin’s smile was wry. “Never
a choice in your mind, remember? Not so for her.”

“One person cannot defeat the Cult of Sauron,” Orla was
saying. “I tried before, and I lost everything.”

“If any could do it, I’d lay my coin on you,” said Dwalin
staunchly. She let out a quiet huff of amusement.

“Not helping, dear.”

“I think that the defeat of the Cult of Sauron must belong
not to one, but to many,” said Ashkar. Then they laughed sourly. “That is, if
it can be done at all, homeless and hopeless as we are.”

“You are welcome here,” said the Stonehelm. “For as long as
you need sanctuary. You are not friendless.”

“And the rest of our people? For there are many living in
fear,” said Ashkar. Their eyes were shrewd as they rested upon the King. The
Stonehelm grimaced, but nodded.

“Aye, them too. It’ll be a tight squeeze, no doubt…”

“No, we cannot make ourselves such a target,” said Orla,
standing up swiftly. “The Cult will insinuate that Erebor is seeking an Empire
– that the Longbeards intend to assimilate and colonise the Orocarni by holding
Blacklock Dwarves as hostages, rather
than taking in refugees! They will find their excuse for a war, no matter what
you do. And they will paint us as the aggressors. You thought those Dalemen
were vicious liars? They were children compared to the Cult of Sauron.”

The Stonehelm ran a hand through his hair. “We can see them
off, as we did before…”

“So soon after the last lot?” Dwalin looked torn. “I hate t’
say it, lad…”

“We beat their armies, didn’t we?”

“Not really,” Dwalin said, very reluctantly. “They left when
Mordor fell. If the Ring hadn’t been destroyed, we’d have starved to death by
now.”

“And look at the cost of victory,” snapped Orla. “Dale is a
ruin, two peoples lost their kings – our dead fill our tombs – there was fire
and treachery in the very heart of the Mountain!”

“They can’t do it,” Balin whispered. “Erebor is too weak,
too exposed…”

“I won’t leave these Dwarves living in tyranny and fear,
with nowhere to go!” said the Stonehelm, slamming his hand against his thigh. “My
father said it once, and I will say it again: we are a people who lose their
homes, century after century, and I will not see it repeat itself henceforth! These
are meant to be days of peace, of rebuilding, free of the Shadow at last! When
do we say ‘enough’? Where can they seek refuge, if not here? Our homes are
their homes: I will hear no argument, and I will not support any inaction that
will see Dwarrows fleeing into the wilderness once more, alone and rejected. We
must give them our aid. We must find another way.”

“But where?” said Dwalin in frustration. “We’re exhausted!
Not the Iron Hills either, they’re too barren to support more mouths, and they
too are exposed to the Northern trade routes…”

“Blue Mountains? You can’t get further from the East than
that,” suggested the Stonehelm, but his voice was dubious.

“Oh, even better, ask ‘em to settle an abandoned and
crumbling ruin, half a world away,” sneered Dwalin.

“The Cult would accuse us of slavery and exploitation, it
would be used to fuel their propaganda,” said Orla, with a jerk of her head. “It’d be
added to the list of justifications for attacking us: the outrage over the conditions
there would unite many people against us. Ered Luin is out of the question.”

“Aglarond,” said Legolas, suddenly.

The word fell across the argument like a granite slab,
rendering all silent with confusion. Gimli gasped, and Thranduil tipped his
head, his expression thoughtful. His eyes rested on Gimli with piercing
curiosity.

“The… place, with the caves. In Rohan,” he said.

“Aye, though calling them ‘the place with the caves in
Rohan’ is doing them a vast disservice,” Gimli said, eagerly leaning forward.
“My king, it’s perfect – the White Mountains are ringed all about by the Lands
of Men, and we can call upon the Horse-Lords and upon Gondor to aid us if
needed!”

“It is closer to Umbar than we are,” said Orla, but her face
was clearing as she mulled it over. It seemed that the idea was to her liking.

“True enough, but there’s no clear route from the East.”
Gimli stood and began to pace, gesticulating with his broad hands as he thought
aloud. “We’re in direct line to the East here in Erebor, and only the Iron
Hills stand between us and them, and they could go around those, quite easily.
Whereas the Glittering Caves!”

“That’s right,” Legolas agreed. “There’s the whole of Mordor
in the way, to begin with – the Towers of the Teeth, and then the River
Anduin…”

“Osgiliath and Gondor…!” Gimli said, pouncing on this with
some enthusiasm. “And if by some miracle they get through Aragorn and Faramir,
they’d have to sneak past Meduseld unseen, which from that vantage point is
nigh-on impossible! We’d have the fortress of Helms Deep to use as a base for
our fortifications…”

“After some renovation, I should hope,” Legolas said drily.

“Hush you, cheeky Elf, I’m thinking.” Gimli grinned at
Legolas.

“As it happens so rarely, I apologise for the interruption,”
Legolas murmured, and Gimli snorted and flipped a hand at him.

“I’ll deal with that comment
later. But this is a very good idea. Aglarond is a new place, a new home, and
belongs to no clan. We could build it together. Surrounded by allies and in a
heavily defensible valley, we could easily shelter any refugees of the Orocarni
who are fleeing the death-throes of the Cult.”

“Look at Thranduil,” said Balin, and Thorin glanced over at
the Elvenking. He was watching Gimli with unconcealed intensity now, as though
absorbing his every word and movement for later study.

“This is all sounding very fine,” said Ashkar in a dry
voice, “but how are you going to let them
know that, without letting the Cult know?”

“Oh, I suspect the Cult will know, almost immediately.”
Gimli waved that away. “That’s another problem. The first problem is to let anyone in the East know. And the second
is to convince them that our intentions are good.”

Ashkar looked surprised. “What?”

Gimli snorted. “Well, you wanted nothing to do with me at
first, eh? A Northern Dwarf, a Longbeard. Gondor and the West meant nothing
good to you: it meant slavery, slaughter and dominion. Such is the fruit of the
history between you. Were I to walk into the Ghomali court tomorrow and make my
offer, it would not be long before the Cult tried to twist my words into these
foul, miserable shapes of old. Am I right?”

“You’re right,” said Kara flatly, before Ashkar could
answer.

“Then we find a way to make our offer, and then we find a
way to make it believed,” Gimli said, and he rubbed his hands together. “The rest is not up to us, but to them. Ach, I need
a pipe. Thinking on a knotty problem always goes better with a smoke, as Sam
says!”

(tbc) 

How are Orla’s cousins doing in Erebor? They didn’t feature much in the new chapter, and I’m curious. I hope that they’re getting lots of dwarfling cuddles and good food.

Oh, we’re gonna get a LOT of them next chapter! I wanted to clear away the wedding stuff first, though – the next chapter is ‘WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?’ heheheheheh!

So yeah, we’re gonna see plenty of Kara and Ashkar interacting with Orla (and a very bewildered Dwalin) soon!

It’s been a while since fanfic happened

dain-mothafocka:

In Sansukh Chapter 43, we meet some exiled Orocarni dwarves. Yall know how much I love exiled Orocarni dwarves, so I wrote a thing about exiled Orocarni dwarves with the two new characters we meet, Askhar and Orla. As ever, these belong to @determamfidd, I only provide the enthusiasm from the sidelines. 

TW: blood, violence, swearing

“There
is nothing – I repeat – nothing to fear, if we give Sauron
no reason to cause us harm!”

Clamour
broke out once again among the Courts of the Blacklocks, high within
the upper ring of Ghomal.

“It’s
false – it’s heresy – cast him out!” shrieked one dwarf, rising
to their feet, their eyes flashing, and with a great roar of
agreement from their fellows around them.

Hanay’s
eyes narrowed and his chest puffed up like a vulture settling down to
judge a potential meal.

“Really,
Askhar, you do yourself a disservice yelling like that. This is the
Court of the Queen.” Though Councillor Hanay’s voice was steady and
his face bland, the hint of bared teeth behind his thin lips belied
his true feelings.

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OH MY GOD OH MY FUCKING GOD

i wanna punch Hanay and then shave him bald, what an absolute EVIL ARSEHOLE holy shit I hate him so MUCH

laksjdhgflajshdgfalj AHHHY KARA YES MY YOUNG SPITFIRE KICK HIS BUTT, YES ASHKAR MY LOVE, YOU TELL HIM WHAT FOR OMFG

afldgaljsahfgal THIS IS NOW WHAT HAPPENED AND NOTHING ELSE, I AM SCREAMING IN JOY AND OH MY GOD THE REST OF THE NAZBUKHRIN AND INTER- AND INTRA-OROCARNI MENTIONS AND AND OMFGAUUUUGH

SAURONIC CULTISTS AND EASTERN HISTORY AND ASLKDGFLAJSHFGAY ORLA AND KARA AND ASHKARRRRRR

AND ALSO HANAY NEEDS A GOOD KICKING

holy shit I am howlign here – J, this is fucking AMAZING. I love it, I love you, and holy shit I love these DWARVES. Thank you SO GODDAMN MUCH! 

Easterling – Eirhi (OC), Jeri, OCs…

dain-mothafocka:

Some context for those who haven’t read my other stories: Eirhi is an OC, the son of Jeri (Longbeard, of Sansukh fame) and Khalei, a Blacklock OC of mine. This ficlet explores being mixed race, visibility, and Orocarni Dwarves’ relationships to the term ‘Easterling’. As a mixed person, it was kinda difficult to write in some places. Also, the term ‘mother’ is used in a gender neutral fashion. 

See end for notes.

“Are you an Easterling, then?”

Eirhi looked the Longbeard dead in the eye. Something uncomfortable pushed at the space between his stomach and his heart – a bit like the same nauseous pressure he got when someone rudely asked about the nature of his heritage.
He felt his kh’busi, now more than ever, resting tightly on his head, tied like his mother’s behind his ears. 

The fabric was heavy, the two twists of cloth weighing down on his shoulders. The mbouraz pierced through his septum seemed to pull down to his lip, even though it wasn’t nearly as stretched as his elders’.

 Are you an Easterling, then?

The question had been one he remembered asking his mother when they were baking bread back in Erebor. He had been young and starting to learn how to prepare some traditional Ghomali food, when it had suddenly come to him, rising out of the depths in a garbled question – “Amad, are we Easterlings?”

His mother had given him a long look; he remembered their face being very high up, so he must have been small then. He remembered them crouching down and placing their soft hands on his shoulders, brushing the little plaits of his kh’busi out of the way gently. They had looked very tired, and it had taken them a long time to find the right words. 

“There’s no shame in being from the East. There’s no shame in who we are, or the lands we call our home. Do you understand?” And Eirhi had nodded hesitantly, but he hadn’t really felt that his question had been answered – the bread had smelled too good to resist, though.

The next time he wondered it, it had been when he was out in Gondor on a trip with Uncle Bulia. He was much older, but hadn’t travelled in the lands of Men outside of Rhûn. To the Men of Rhûn, the Easterlings as Easterlings were known, the Dwarves of the Orocarni most definitely were kin – and were also, as the Westerners called them (in one homogenous lump) ‘Easterlings’.  

While Uncle Bulia swaggered ahead of him in Minas Tirith, talking with Uncle Varhi, he’d lagged behind. From this angle, Eirhi saw the eyes of some of the Gondorians around them, fixed like arrowheads on a target at the group of Dwarves, and he’d felt a defiant blush rising up into his freckled cheeks. He heard the word again, hissing around him in the air: Easterlings

Eirhi had looked down at his Eastern clothes, his Eastern shoes and Eastern jewellery – all exquisitely made by the finest tailors in the Ghomal or bought from the goldsmiths in Vishderzyu. He’d actually had enough of an ego to twirl for his mother that morning, as they and his uncles had clapped and gushed over how splendid he looked. But now he knew he stood out like a lit beacon, and he’d never felt more like a bloody Easterling. 

He had tried to catch up with the rest of the group, but as he rushed ahead he’d felt his other parent take his elbow and turn him around. 

“What is it?” they’d asked, concerned at Eirhi’s flushed face and quick breath. Some of the Men around them continued to stare at Uncle Bulia and Uncle Varhi like they were strange creatures, and Eirhi concentrated on his parents’ face, trying to block them out. Without their mbouraz and kh’busi, they looked very much like any of the other Longbeard traders from Erebor that frequented Gondor, and Eirhi’s voice caught in his throat. 

Different. 

“You don’t understand,” he managed to mutter bitterly.

Am I an Easterling? he’d thought, trudging away to his uncles and leaving his parent behind. Eirhi had been quiet that evening and his mother had questioned him about it – but he couldn’t bring himself to raise the subject. Instead, he’d gone up to his room early and had taken off his kh’busi. He’d looked in the mirror. If he flipped up his mbouraz, the heavy ring through his nose (which he almost attempted), then he could be read like his other parent, like a Longbeard. 

You’re not, are you though? spoke a voice in his mind. If he listened to it one way, it sounded snide and mocking. If he listened to it another way, it was the clear, sensible voice of his mother. He’d wrapped his kh’busi around his head again, turning away from the mirror when he couldn’t bear to look at himself any more, and sat in bed silently for a very long time. 

I am an Easterling. 

Eirhi looked the Longbeard dead in his eye. The snake of embarrassment had the Rhûnic eagle tearing into it, clawing painfully at his insides and forcing him to answer. Eirhi thought of the wide, sun bleached plains, and the vast, breathtaking rivers. The first time he’d been out of Erebor as an older child and had sailed into Ghomal – seeing where he really came from. The mix of people from the East and the South, Dwarves and Men, the languages, the faces, the clothes, the streets. This was his East. 

“Yes,” replied Eirhi, a glint in his eye as he raised his chin. “I am an Easterling.”

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BRB GOT TO GO CRY A BIT ABOUT EIRHI AND KHALEI AND JERI AND ALL OF THEM

beautiful, Jade. Absolutely beautiful.

Little Plant – Jeri/OC, OCs and yet more OCs. Sansukh fanfiction

dain-mothafocka:

For poplitealqueen and all mixed race people who get shit everyday from outside and inside fandom. We are beautiful and powerful and our cultures are within us, as well as outside of us. Let’s write about awesome mixed race dwarves being proudly mixed race as fuck! Btw the character Ojal is pop so. 

ALSO YOU WILL UNDERSTAND THE PUNCHLINE IF YOU READ MY PREVIOUS FICS JSYK

It was customary, after the birth of an Eastern Dwarven child outside of the Orocarni, for the parents to make that journey with them as soon as was comfortable – back to the mountains that they would always call ‘home’ in their hearts. Khalei and Jeri’s bright star had been born in late Winter, and they both decided that they would wait for the mighty rivers that would bear them across Rhun to thaw, and for the child to settle into life in the safety and warmth of Erebor. 

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dain-mothafocka:

poplitealqueen:

For dain-mothafocka.

This is Khalei, her half-Firebeard half-Blacklock Dwarf OC from the Orocarni that is really damn cool. You can read a ficlet that has them in this post here.

The headscarf shown is known as a Kh’busi: a garb some of the Blacklock dwarves wear to show their family and Clan history. (This is only a taste of delish Orocarni headcanons, bet you thought it was canon!)

Seriously, Khalei is bae. Every day.

I can’t even fuuuuuuuuuuu

so good so so good so good I love this interpretation. that busi is fuckin a* so regal and majestic. 

and tHEIR HAIR. Wow. That’s next level hair. 

They look so intimidating but in a ‘you will never be this pretty’ way and so boss. no wonder Jeri was scared. 

What happens in the weapons room. Sansukh fanfic. Jeri/OC

dain-mothafocka:

After
King Thorin Stonehelm’s coronation, two dwarves from the East arrive
in the fray of battle to Erebor. One of them grabs Jeri’s attention,
and the member of the King’s Elite Guard has quite possibly the most
awkward conversation of their life. Featuring dwarven gender feels,
and Jeri being a blushing bag of flails when faced with someone they
fancy.

Of course as you know, all Sansukh characters belong to determamfidd. Akhsan and Khalei belong to me. Khalei being, of course, a shameless self-insert. 

It
was with a rush of anticipation that the gathered crowd drew their
weapons behind the front gate of Erebor. At the behest of King
Stonehelm, a spear wall had been quickly formed: not five minutes
ago, a lookout had informed them that a charioteer was headed towards
the gates through the writhing mass of Orcs and dark beasts, bearing
the insignia of Khand and standing atop a huge, fast-moving wain.
Just one of them – a messenger.

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HNNNNNGH OMFG

Jade, this is gorgeous – Ahhhhhh! Orocarni gender customs! Khalei! JERI BEING A STAMMERY BLUSHY MESS. AHKSAN THE BADASS – scuse me, too much awesome there, i am combusting internally – ORLA RECOGNISING HIM AND BASICALLY FANGIRLING ALL OVER THE PLACE AHHH

Jeri being a foot-in-mouth giant sprout and Khalei the smooth motherfucker, AUGH I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH HOLY HELL

Thank you, thank you, HNNNGH, thank you so so so so much!!

*Grooves into ask box* Hi, anons. Not all Dwarves would speak Westron as a primary language! There are 4 awesome Dwarf Clans to the East who would speak the Mannish languages of their area! So they’d use that plus Khuzdul and maybe Westron as well. Have a great day, and don’t forget us brown Dwarves! #flawless. *dances out*

AH YES – I should totally have mentioned that I was speaking only of the three Western clans. WHOOPS, SORRY, BOO TO DETS, NO BISCUIT. 

The Eastern Dwarves would absolutely have their own language awesomeness happening!