Workday blues…
…write lullaby lyrics instead!!
Tag: poetry
I have made learning Renaissance and Early Modern poetry into a game: how many poems directly remind me of Sansukh, and how many of the rest can I make about Sansukh anyway? (A lot. A lot of them.)
WHAT WHAT WHAT??? REALLY???

The Old Gumbie Dwarf
(Aka the latest installment of Erebor Cats.)
For determamfidd and fuckthisimgoingtoerebor
This was originally going to be about Bombur, but… he was too shy to appear.
So it’s about his son instead – Barur Stonebelly, from determamfidd’s amazing work Sansukh – and with a cameo by Gimizh Cookie-Thief.
YIIYIYIYIYIYIYIYYIIIIII AHH FILI
Yessss BARUR, marshmallow-centered honeypie that he is!!! CATS + DWARVES WILL NEVER GET OLD FOR MEEEE, bc lotr and musical theatre? Two of my biggest most tragic obsessions colliding like this? NGGGH, and you just make em fit so beautifullly *hugs you* thank you so much!
is it only me, but Bilbo = Grizabella makes my heart hurt A LOT
Dain Ironfoot Week – Day Three
Today’s theme: Over Time
(The original inspiration for this was ‘Kerowyn’s Ride’ by Mercedes Lackey, but it… expanded.)
Ironfoot’s Ride
Ironfoot, Ironfoot, where are you riding?
Your wounds scarcely healed and an axe by your side
Your face filled with sorrow and fury and fear
Tell me, young Ironfoot, where do you ride?Our father, our leader, was most foully slain:
The heir to great Durin, now ne’er to regain
His throne or his kingdom. O, fierce was our hate!
And I slew the great orc at the Moria gate.But though we prevailed, still our forces wore thin,
The war took my parents, my cousins, my kin.
Aye, the bodies lay thick by the end of the fray,
And we’d not enough stone to entomb them away.Do you see the smoke rising from far in the west,
Where the corpses still burn of our brightest and best?
And the army that follow now march on my word;
I left home but a lad, I return now a Lord.Ironfoot, Ironfoot, where are you riding?
Ahead of your warriors: so grimly they stride
They whisper of sieges, of treasure and madness
Tell me, stout Ironfoot, where do you ride?We ride to the west where our kinfolk need aiding:
Their mountain besieged and two armies invading.
And many leagues hence we could still hear their thunder –
What chance have but fourteen against such a number?The dragon no longer his slumber is keeping,
But in the great lake now forever is sleeping.
And O the great hoard of our treasures reclaimed!
But I fear – how I fear for one I will not name.For gold that a dragon long time has kept near
Is more deadly to dwarves than a poison-tipped spear.
Though I ride at his bidding to settle his trouble,
Will I find my old friend, or his grandfather’s double?Ironfoot, Ironfoot, where are you riding?
The years now have silvered your once-blazing pride
Though hale, you are aged, and should surely be resting
Tell me, old Ironfoot, where do you ride?Old evil returns, a foul dealing of fate,
An army of orc-spawn now batters our gates.
To Rivendell’s council we sent of our best;
Our star now pursues a most perilous quest.And if Erebor fails, the north lands will fall,
And the orcs will go southwards to answer his call.
But while I still breathe we will not see that day:
I take axe to do battle against lawful prey.And dwarves in their age are not weakened and frail,
But stone-like we harden: we fight ‘til we fail!
My people still need me, my kingdom, my land,
I take my last ride; I will make my last stand.
ORI I WROTE YOU A SONG
And we’ve decided it’s Sansukh-verse, so I guess I also wrote you a song, determamfidd.
IT’S A MOURNING-SONG. AREN’T I NICE.
We determined that Ori scribbled this in the margins of his book while he was waiting to be killed in Moria. (I’m so nice)
Each verse represents a different member of the company (with the exception of Fili and Kili, who are together, and the last verse, which isn’t anyone). Can you figure out who’s who?
Oh yeouchhhhh
the zodiac in poetry
(insp. by this post, redone with more of the poets I love – I hope that’s okay!)
Aries: Seamus Heaney
Move lips, move minds and make new meanings flare
Like ancient beacons signalling, peak to peak,
From middle sea to north sea, shining clear
As phoenix flame upon fionn uisce here.Taurus: Adrienne Rich
I could say: those mountains have a meaning
but further than that I could not say.To do something very common, in my own way.
Gemini: William Butler Yeats
All changed, changed utterly:
A terrible beauty is born.Cancer: Pablo Neruda
Of all the stars I admired, drenched
in various rivers and mists,
I chose only the one I love.Leo: Dorothy Parker
She that calls for costly things
Priceless finds her offerings-
What’s impossible to kings?Virgo: HD
But more than the many-foamed ways
Of the sea,
I know him
Of the triple path-ways,
Hermes,
Who awaiteth.Libra: T. S. Eliot
Because of the goodness of this Lady
And because of her loveliness, and because
She honours the Virgin in meditation,
We shine with brightness.Scorpio: John Keats
Darkling I listen; and, for many a time
I have been half in love with easeful Death,
Call’d him soft names in many a mused rhyme,
To take into the air my quiet breathSagittarius: Christina Rossetti
Oh that’s a meteor sent us, a message dumb, portentous,
An undeciphered solemn signal of help or hurt.Capricorn: Carol Ann Duffy
Some nights, although we are faithless, the truth
enters our hearts, that small familiar pain;
then a man will stand stock-still, hearing his youth
in the distant Latin chanting of a train.Aquarius: John Donne
Dull sublunary lovers’ love
(Whose soul is sense) cannot admit
Absence, because it doth remove
Those things which elemented it.Pisces: Edna St. Vincent Millay
Safe upon the solid rock the ugly houses stand:
Come and see my shining palace built upon the sand!
Garden Door
You reap what you sow,
So I planted a door,
To take me to places I’ve not been before.And though it may earn me,
Some curious looks,
I water it with passages read from my books.I clear out the weeds,
(Save a few morning glories),
And dream about places known only in stories.And when people ask me,
Just where will it go?
I tell them that I don’t really know.But I can’t wait to see,
Can’t wait to go in!
Just as soon as it grows big enough to open.-Notanightlight, 2015
ohaylookthisonesnotdepressingwhat
Eh. I wanted to explore what I’m gonna refer to as a poetic crossover, which I’m 80% sure isn’t what I’m referring to. Trying to mash up the poetry style that I associate with Harry Potter and the one I associate with the Lord of the Rings.
*shrugs* I like this one, so… (not actually about any specific character this time! Unless you count Sting…)
Look, ma! (er… determamfidd) I can write non-depressing poetry for your verse!)
askdjgflajsgfalsjhd OH MY WoRD KILI *hugs poem*
stiiing and 100 years and happiness and ahhhh…!
I have a lot of Fairbairn of the Tower feelings right now ❤
I was listening to (every single rendition of) Iron Hills for Me, and it occurred to me that “The Iron Hills for me!” is rather reminiscent of “The wide brown land for me!” Is there by any chance a little of Dorothea MacKellar in the song? (I was also terrifically pleased to see your post about the Iron Hills being Kakadu!)
Oh my god…!
I hadn’t even registered it. Of course! OSMOSIS. IT MUST BE.
Bit of background for those who are going ‘huh?’ right now: Dorothea McKellar is the author of a very famous Australian poem called ‘My Country.’
The most famous stanza goes
I love a sunburnt country,
A land of sweeping plains,
Of ragged mountain ranges,
Of droughts and flooding rains.
I love her far horizons,
I love her jewel-sea,
Her beauty and her terror –
The wide brown land for me!
Uh. Yeah, just a bit familiar! I promise it wasn’t intentional, lol. But it must have snuck in there!
KAKADU. YES. IRON HILLS. KAKADU. I am so glad you like that headcanon, Nonnie! I have had a few people say, ‘no, THIS is the Iron Hills!’ but I continue to stubbornly cling to that idea!
I wrote this to hurt Dain
I’m pretty sure it worked. More depressing Sansukh poetry! This time about Dain and Thorin III Stonehelm.
AUGH KILI
idk about Battlepig, but IT BLOODY HURT ME
*cries into cereal* ohhhhh Dain, ohhhh Thorin Stonehelm ohhhhhh D: